If I were a road, You’d be a traveler
With a broken transmission, slashed tires
And a light that reads empty.
If I were a wreck, You’d be a passenger
With a broken windshield, bruised neck
And a face that reads empty.
If I were death, You’d be a victim
With embalming fluid, fresh makeup
And a body that reads empty.
Came to me within a few minutes. Different approach to my usual, but we'll see.
I see why you got a daily deviation on this. Really dark but very very imagistic and made me feel a hollow, empty feeling inside reading it.... good title!
Wow! I like the imagery.
Oh wow, this is amazing.
great rhythm. the repetition works nicely, too. congrats on the DLD!
Very well written! Sounds like lyrics.
Thank you! lol I used to write lyrics. lmao I actually just got back into writing.
Inside your head, no one's there - and I don't think I'll ever be. And I don't care.
Some reason that quote seems to fit this
Lol goo goo dolls!
OH MY GOD YOU KNOW THE SONG
Of course! lol
You are now my favourite person ever. Naked by the Goo Goo Dolls is literally my favourite song and hardly anybody knows it
Lol thank you! Most people only know Iris, but every band usually has a better song and that song unfortunately no one hears. At least it seems that way.