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If I were a road, You’d be a traveler
With a broken transmission, slashed tires
And a light that reads empty.

If I were a wreck, You’d be a passenger
With a broken windshield, bruised neck
And a face that reads empty.

If I were death, You’d be a victim
With embalming fluid, fresh makeup
And a body that reads empty.
Came to me within a few minutes. Different approach to my usual, but we'll see. 
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carmennge Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I see why you got a daily deviation on this. Really dark but very very imagistic and made me feel a hollow, empty feeling inside reading it.... good title! :)
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2014
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, that means a lot to me! :D 
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Dreamworld88 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Student Writer
Wow! I like the imagery.
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014
Thank you! :)
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My-Sword-is-Bigger Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh wow, this is amazing.
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Thank you! :)
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
great rhythm. the repetition works nicely, too. congrats on the DLD! :)
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BackShelfSouvenir Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
:) Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
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setmyworldintomotion Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
you're welcome. :rose:
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DailyLitDeviations Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014
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